Comments for Brownian Neuron http://venkiraja.wordpress.com It seems as if this whole god damn thing is organised,orderly and tidy.The truth is its completely unsymmetric,unstable and chaotic! Wed, 06 May 2009 13:11:36 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Vertex by venkiraja http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-169 venkiraja Wed, 06 May 2009 13:11:36 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-169 Oh.. Thanks a lot aloveonenia! Oh.. Thanks a lot aloveonenia!

]]> Comment on Vertex by aloveonenia http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-167 aloveonenia Fri, 17 Apr 2009 07:07:33 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-167 nice, really nice! nice, really nice!

]]> Comment on Vertex by venkiraja http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-163 venkiraja Mon, 30 Mar 2009 16:43:53 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-163 Thanks! Will do it in some time! Thanks! Will do it in some time!

]]> Comment on Vertex by aniramzee http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-162 aniramzee Mon, 30 Mar 2009 02:15:19 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-162 All that is fine but the makers of these movies worked years on end to get the screenplay right so the flow is smooth.Doing that is definitely not easy.See what you can do to make it more continuous. All that is fine but the makers of these movies worked years on end to get the screenplay right so the flow is smooth.Doing that is definitely not easy.See what you can do to make it more continuous.

]]> Comment on Vertex by venkiraja http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-161 venkiraja Sat, 28 Mar 2009 19:27:10 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-161 Thanks FA! I wanted to edit the narrative further, but it was more confusing that way. And if it wasn't non-linear it actually loses its charm. I don't wanna say this but look at this: > Boy loves girl - makes a bet- parts > Bus driver comes late - Drives without a brake > TV editor edits the news - goes to pick up his bro > Lovers meet again - Bus accident > Boy dies - Girl goes mad > Brother glances it all > Bus strike - Girl missing - Becomes Lunatic Looks very ordinary. And I must admit my inspirations from Pulp Fiction, Magnolia and more importantly Amores Perros. I liked your blog as well! Thanks FA!
I wanted to edit the narrative further, but it was more confusing that way. And if it wasn’t non-linear it actually loses its charm. I don’t wanna say this but look at this:
> Boy loves girl – makes a bet- parts
> Bus driver comes late – Drives without a brake
> TV editor edits the news – goes to pick up his bro
> Lovers meet again – Bus accident
> Boy dies – Girl goes mad
> Brother glances it all
> Bus strike – Girl missing – Becomes Lunatic

Looks very ordinary. And I must admit my inspirations from Pulp Fiction, Magnolia and more importantly Amores Perros.
I liked your blog as well!

]]> Comment on Vertex by Fa http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-160 Fa Sat, 28 Mar 2009 10:36:26 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-160 nice story...ends well..a little disjointed narrative. but nice. keep it up. may be u shd rewrite the beginning and then send it in for sm online short story competitions nice story…ends well..a little disjointed narrative. but nice.
keep it up. may be u shd rewrite the beginning and then send it in for sm online short story competitions

]]> Comment on Vertex by venkiraja http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-159 venkiraja Sat, 28 Mar 2009 09:21:40 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-159 Shakthi aNNi: Thanks a bunch! :-) You mean to say the judges were stupid? LOL Aniramzee: Thanks for your admiration! You mean to say it needs editing... in what way? Shakthi aNNi: Thanks a bunch! :-) You mean to say the judges were stupid? LOL

Aniramzee: Thanks for your admiration! You mean to say it needs editing… in what way?

]]> Comment on Vertex by aniramzee http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-158 aniramzee Sat, 28 Mar 2009 04:00:52 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-158 Exactly what I said when you told me the story.It was more like screenplay.Following a story on screen is much easier than following it in a book because seeing is remembering. Non-linear stories are fine but they need to be edited and re-edited until the it becomes an effortless read. Think about it, edit, and re-post. Your expression was mind blasting :P. Especially liked these "As the signal was about to ripen from green" "I work as a video barber for a private television network which telecasts news sponsored by political parties between detergent commercials" Exactly what I said when you told me the story.It was more like screenplay.Following a story on screen is much easier than following it in a book because seeing is remembering. Non-linear stories are fine but they need to be edited and re-edited until the it becomes an effortless read. Think about it, edit, and re-post. Your expression was mind blasting :P . Especially liked these
“As the signal was about to ripen from green”
“I work as a video barber for a private television network which telecasts news sponsored by political parties between detergent commercials”

]]> Comment on Vertex by Shakthiprabha http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/03/27/vertex/#comment-157 Shakthiprabha Fri, 27 Mar 2009 08:57:29 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=355#comment-157 I have no right words to tell the impact the story had on me. Destiny and weakhearts dont gel well. Good story, delivered with cumbersome style. Knots are not released well in the climax, readers have to rake their brain. Judges had to strain and hence avoided awarding. Doesn't matter. The effect remains. I have no right words to tell the impact the story had on me. Destiny and weakhearts dont gel well.

Good story, delivered with cumbersome style. Knots are not released well in the climax, readers have to rake their brain. Judges had to strain and hence avoided awarding.

Doesn’t matter. The effect remains.

]]> Comment on A.R.R is great. by Thalafanz http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/2009/02/23/arr-is-great/#comment-155 Thalafanz Thu, 26 Mar 2009 13:29:10 +0000 http://venkiraja.wordpress.com/?p=293#comment-155 ARR The Great!!! Proud to be an Indian. This is just the beginning :) Jai Ho :) ARR The Great!!! Proud to be an Indian.
This is just the beginning :)
Jai Ho :)

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